Room 6 Is The Best

Monday June 02nd 2008, 6:22 pm
Filed under: Allan

It all started on Mars the biggest planet in the solar system I was sent to Mars by a rocket ship. I walked out of the rocket. I needed a special suit to get out of the rocket. When I landed on Mars I saw a cave. In the cave I saw a strange hairy alien . The alien was big and it was biting a big piece of ground. I was amazed and I took some pictures and then I went back to Earth. Then I had a call from the alien. He then came to Earth I let him in. We talked to each other, I could not understand the alien. Soon he went back to Mars

The End

17 Comments so far

It was cool and funny

Comment by Monish 06.09.08 @ 8:05 pm

Cool story Allan I liked it when the the alien was in the cave.But their was a few mistakes in the story so you should probably work on your writing but it was a really great story !!!

Comment by Thomas 06.09.08 @ 8:13 pm

So cool I want to here more-Ishan

Comment by room06 06.23.08 @ 8:00 pm

This story rocks Allan its funny as!
please,please,please write some more it is so cool as I love it-I’m you’re biggest fan!-Calvin

Comment by Calvin 06.23.08 @ 8:06 pm

Great!!! write more! WRITE MORE!!!!!!

Comment by Joel 06.25.08 @ 7:57 pm

I Allan,

Your story is really cool because you described the alien really well!!Write some more.

Dylan

Comment by Dylan 06.25.08 @ 8:00 pm

That was so cool Allan I. Liked it so much.

Comment by room06 06.28.08 @ 10:06 pm

really nice story.i liked the alien ringing you up

Comment by georgia 06.30.08 @ 2:34 pm

super work allan super writing i love your fantastic work

Comment by enoch 06.30.08 @ 2:46 pm

you rock you are great

Comment by jordan 06.30.08 @ 2:51 pm

super thanks Enoch I am going to write more:):(

Comment by allan 07.01.08 @ 1:59 pm

That is so cool I liked it so much ;( :).

Comment by Monish 07.01.08 @ 2:04 pm

thank you monish for the comment

Comment by allan 07.01.08 @ 2:05 pm

thanks Thomas i well change the mistmaks

Comment by allan 07.01.08 @ 2:08 pm

i like Allan it’s really cool man!!!…

from your friend
Chris

Comment by Christian 07.01.08 @ 2:12 pm

cool story

Comment by Christian 07.22.08 @ 1:51 pm

nice story

Comment by Ishan 07.22.08 @ 1:55 pm

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